the story starts with character finishing a meal...amateur hour. never describe a meal in ur story. we all know how it works.

Great story and idea. Defiantly worth the time, just wish it had been a bit longer.

Great story, the ending was awesome!

Very slow moving and disjointed story. With the worst narrator I have ever heard.

Funny. Wasn't sure how it'd end, but it was quick and comical.

Cute..., I guessed the ending fairly early, but I enjoyed the idea. Just wish the story was longer..., I had fun reading it.

Well set in possible future scenario. Plausible interactions both good and bad.